Hi today I am going to tell you a scary story ( done done done ) but its funny as well here we go.
once I was on a midnight walk and I was having a good time I heard some thing behind me and had a look to see what was there then I saw... red eyes so I ran and ran and ran it was following me I looked behind me and saw a... pig. and i was like what the and then i saw more red eyes and ran for my life again and was like this time it better be worth it and I new it was following me then i turned around and saw...Xavier.
The end.
Thank you for reading my story hope you liked it.
Hello Leo, it is Jarvis from Room 8, that is a funny story I enjoyed that part when you said "When I turned around I saw Xavier." That part was my favorite. You gave me a memory of when I did a funny story about a silly cowboy, that was in year 4. Maybe next time you can add some more full stops.
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Jarvis
Hello Leo!
ReplyDeleteIt is yasmin from room 24. That is a very interesting story you told and it is very short.what is your favourite part of the story?
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Yasmin
Ello Leo
ReplyDeleteI say this story was intresting and ya. But when you turned around was there only Xavier cause if there was where did the pig go? Buh Bye :P
Kia Ora Leo, your story is very cool and I like how its detailed and the picture is very cool. How did you make the ball opening its mouth?
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Shannon :)
Hello Leo,
ReplyDeleteThat was a strange but funny story. I was not expecting a PIG to be there! I like your describing.
What was your favourite bit of the story?
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Emma